Hey guys! I am sorry I missed the meeting today guys, its been a very rough week. I will talk to Zach to get filled in and I will deff see you at the next meeting. In the mean time I did think about what we discussed about doing my comic as large images without words. There still is some thinking to be done about it, however I do believe that the less talking the better. With this in mind I re-drew the next page that would need to be carved so that it has larger images and uses no words. I think it would be wise to let the imagery control the story rather than the words. This being said I think to accomplish a decent story without words, or very few of them, the panels, rather than large full size images, would be even more important to create a sequencal story.
Anywho.... I attached the new sketch as well as the original just to get your guys opinion.
(The top one is the original)
Looking good Chris. I'm wondering, do these follow in succession of one another? If so, Perhaps the louvered effect with the eyes changing might be a little too repetitive pacing wise. Yes? You've a note that says, "redo". Is this why?
ReplyDeleteYeah I want to only have the two frames: one with them closed and the other with them open, rather than three frames like the old version.
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