Sunday, April 22, 2012

Chris' Comic

Hey guys! I am sorry I missed the meeting today guys, its been a very rough week. I will talk to Zach to get filled in and I will deff see you at the next meeting. In the mean time I did think about what we discussed about doing my comic as large images without words. There still is some thinking to be done about it, however I do believe that the less talking the better. With this in mind I re-drew the next page that would need to be carved so that it has larger images and uses no words. I think it would be wise to let the imagery control the story rather than the words. This being said I think to accomplish a decent story without words, or very few of them, the panels, rather than large full size images, would be even more important to create a sequencal story.

Anywho.... I attached the new sketch as well as the original just to get your guys opinion.

(The top one is the original)

2 comments:

  1. Looking good Chris. I'm wondering, do these follow in succession of one another? If so, Perhaps the louvered effect with the eyes changing might be a little too repetitive pacing wise. Yes? You've a note that says, "redo". Is this why?

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  2. Yeah I want to only have the two frames: one with them closed and the other with them open, rather than three frames like the old version.

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